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David Perlmutter's avatar

A no dialogue story- I didn't think this was possible...

Colin Devonshire's avatar

But the words wouldn’t come.

David Perlmutter's avatar

I know. It was the fact that Anu wouldn't talk about the murders, when he could have easily confessed, that sealed his doom.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Before you ask, no, I’ve never been a novice.

David Perlmutter's avatar

No have I ever been a dog or a young girl, but I write in the voice of both in some stories.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Haha, true enough. I must start thinking about Friday’s effort. Thanks for your input.

mcbethsandy's avatar

Thanks again Colin

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Hope you like this one. It won’t be to everyone’s taste. But there is a free book if you get to the end, haha

Britt H. aka Mika's avatar

Another great story, Colin. Really love how you created the suspense where I had thought Anu did all this

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Ah ha. Some readers think I am, or was a monk, but no. Just an ordinary fella.

Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Your supernatural stories have a kind of "rightness" to them. They make sense, and they give the reader an idea that the otherworldly is strange, but has its own coherence.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

This is Thailand! Anything can happen, haha

Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

I definitely get that feeling.

PamWhatAm's avatar

I thought it was fantastic; thank you. Just hope I don't dream of monks or temples tonight.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Wow, thank you. Sleep well.