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Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

It's clever how you telegraph the end but keep the reader fascinated with atmosphere and tension. I like the understated gruesomeness.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Thank you. That one was fun writing. Aren’t they all?

tecolote42's avatar

The invite to the 'show' was a dead giveaway. Clever but still 'ick.'