That's a fun, twisty little pulp mystery — the "scared to death" reveal is a good payoff, and the coaster-as-anagram device gives it a nice puzzle-box feel even if it leans a bit far-fetched by design. Good atmospheric setup in that bar too. Carried with care!
An expat man getting milked by a local dancer. You made a common trope sound interesting. I thought it flowed well, and was easy to read but there are a tiny few lines that could be tightened up if you are interested in feedback.
Cults are always interesting. I like the links to folklore and the supernatural, so that your stories have an exotic, tantalising, but forbidding atmosphere.
That's a fun, twisty little pulp mystery — the "scared to death" reveal is a good payoff, and the coaster-as-anagram device gives it a nice puzzle-box feel even if it leans a bit far-fetched by design. Good atmospheric setup in that bar too. Carried with care!
Thank you. Now, what’s next? Thailand is full of real and make-believe tales.
You are welcome! Sounds awesome!
Another enjoyable mystery.
Again, thanks for reading and commenting.
An expat man getting milked by a local dancer. You made a common trope sound interesting. I thought it flowed well, and was easy to read but there are a tiny few lines that could be tightened up if you are interested in feedback.
Are you an editor?
Plumber.
Lilith Fayre.
Cults are always interesting. I like the links to folklore and the supernatural, so that your stories have an exotic, tantalising, but forbidding atmosphere.
Thanks for your comments. Today is my wife’s birthday - there is a story in there!