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Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Oops. Actually, quite funny. Shades of Roald Dahl.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Roald Dahl lived near my Mum when she was young. I wish I could have met him.

Parker McCoy's avatar

Whoa-hoa. Haha. Now that took a turn. Riveting, Colin.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Thank you, glad you liked it.

C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Dark indeed...and a surprise ending.

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting.