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Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Neat twist.

Tracy's avatar

Interesting twist!

Chris J. Franklin's avatar

The bandages were an excellent element to mention at the start. It makes the reader immediately intrigued to find out more about them and what they're doing there. It works very nicely, and the twist at the end was great fun... 😎

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Thank you. It was fun writing it.

Jaap STIJL's avatar

Excellent story!

Kim Smyth's avatar

Its always about a woman in the end!

Colin Devonshire's avatar

Haha, that’s what I told my wife!

Mr . Ma's avatar

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